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Tweak says, "Mmm, sacrilicious..."

the storm and the wonder (la_dissonance) wrote,
@ 2009-05-26 18:43:00

Current location:	the nook
Current music:	Ulrich Schnauss - Goodbye
Entry tags:	! fic, *slash, pairing: draco/ron, rating: r

a drabble, it's a drabble!
Title: Stakeout Surprise
Pairing: Ron/Draco
Word Count: 100x2 or maybe 200
Rating: R
Warnings: None. *porn fail*
Disclaimer: These boys are not mine, otherwise there'd be a lot less chest-monsters in the books and a lot more of the kinky sex.
Notes: This was written for the sole purpose of eking more Draco drabbles out of torino10154, and should be regarded with appropriate skepticism. Since I habitually avoid drabble writing if possible, I've no idea what the difference is between a 200 word drabble and a 100x2 word drabble, but probably there should at least be a scene change involved. *shifty eyes*

Draco had no great fondness for Ron Weasley, but he loved his cock. Loved it. Repeatedly, and often, and in a wide variety of locations. Ron seldom protested, except for the first time (it had been the surprise), and now.

"Malfoy! You can't suck your partner off right in the middle of an important stakeout!" His protest was punctuated by grunts as he tried to wrestle Draco's head off his lap.

Draco let go of Ron's shaft reluctantly, afraid as always that this time would be the last time. Any day, Ron would remember how Draco's attentions should disgust him.

~

Ron cleared his throat. "How about something that lets us both keep our eyes on the job, instead?"

Draco didn't dare meet his eyes, but he gladly wrapped his fingers around Ron's leaking prick. He was surprised when a large hand brushed against the bulge in his own trousers. Out of all the times he'd done this, Ron had never offered to reciprocate.

Glancing over, he saw that Ron's eyes were fixed on their target across the river. Draco fought to do the same even as rough fingers burrowed past his waistband.

"Alright?" Ron asked when Draco gasped.

"Oh, yeah."

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	torino10154 2009-05-26 08:49 pm UTC (link)
	Oh that's nice. Yum. You have no excuses not to write drabbles. Sorry. ;) Great job!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	la_dissonance 2009-05-26 09:02 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, thanks! lol, I think I was just so down on this one because the first one I wrote was a lot better. There's also that sneaking fear that if I admit to any real skill at drabble writing, I'll just do that and never go back to full-length fic. :P (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	torino10154 2009-05-26 09:04 pm UTC (link)
	I'll just do that and never go back to full-length fic LOL I have to laugh because as I spent the day fucking off writing drabbles, I have my June daily_deviant fic staring at me. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	la_dissonance 2009-05-26 09:09 pm UTC (link)
	SEE how seductive they are? See! It's totally not just me being paranoid. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	torino10154 2009-05-26 09:11 pm UTC (link)
	LOL Too true. I think I like the rush, it's like a drug really. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	la_dissonance 2009-05-26 09:17 pm UTC (link)
	Exactly. Really long sentences are my anti-drug. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alisanne 2009-05-26 11:32 pm UTC (link)
	Oh YUM! You seriously need to write more drabbles. evilly enables Awesome! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	la_dissonance 2009-05-26 11:49 pm UTC (link)
	Whee, thanks! Glad you liked it. :) Evil enabler, evil! wags finger (Reply to this) (Parent)

	strickens_girl 2009-05-27 12:51 am UTC (link)
	Whoa! Very nice. My inner Ron approves. g (Reply to this) (Thread)

	la_dissonance 2009-05-27 12:59 am UTC (link)
	Thanks! Ron just needed a little time to catch up to that turn of events - he's well on the way to getting things right now. ^^ (Reply to this) (Parent)

	drachenmina 2009-05-27 04:23 pm UTC (link)
	Mmm. It has layers. channels Shrek (Reply to this) (Thread)

	la_dissonance 2009-05-27 04:41 pm UTC (link)
	Hehehehe, that it does! Thanks :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	prayer_at_night 2009-05-28 02:41 pm UTC (link)
	At first, this made me giggle (Loved it. Repeatedly, and often, and in a wide variety of locations.), and then, at the end, I was like "Guh!", because this has to be the beginning of a sickeningly sweet happily ever after! (And yes, I am hopelessly romantic.^^) And I love Draco being insecure!/// (Reply to this) (Thread)

la_dissonance
2009-05-28 08:33 pm UTC (link)

Aww, YAY, this is the kind of comment that makes me do gleeful happy dances all over the room. I'm so glad you liked it, and that all those things I was trying to get across actually made it (it felt like I ended up cutting every other sentence I'd written, lol). And yes, it's definitely the beginning of their happily ever after. Ron was just a bit slow to catch up. xD

Thank you!! ♥

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